BookRix

Well 1 this is a short/long story ya know small chapters long story, 2 this is the "sloppy copy" as some would say, I am working on the final result that the grammar is better by extend the content what did you have in mind and could you explain lightly what you mean? To tell you the truth with how the character acts she is basically a rich 21 year old that really could careless at this point, there are alot of references to Valve games which is where this story is heading. Right into Left 4 Dead 2, have you ever played any Valve games? They are really great and fun to play... But I have finished the next chapter and re-edited this one and I will be submitting them very soon, probably today... The next chapter really goes in depth about her but really not the best descriptions and what not, but not edited yet so yea... and why I just put 1 and 2 at the start of this comment I have no idea....