BookRix

your book was good but very short

the story is great, but you need to add more punctuation signs,

aweswome

nice book and a good ending keep writing would like to see what else you got

i love it so far! You know, I'm going to be honest: the grammer, spelling, and some of the storyline needs a little bit of work, but the story is as interesting as it is creepy. I think it's a really good book, you know. You should make a sequel if you haven't already, or at least make it a little longer. As soon as I was finished, I felt disappointed because there wasn't anymore to read. And yes, the ghost Jason is quite the creepy character.

You know, you should join my group, 'All Things Unseen'. We could really use a writer like you!

Good idea but even if you were typing fast you need to fix it because you cant rush its been months and im still on my first book!

sorry i mispelled spme words cause i was typing fast

nice story line bad spelling tho

good imagination.. keep writing.. :-)

you didnt like it why