Only on page 6 of this, but had to stop to tell you "Bravo, darling!" Yours is some of the best writing I've seen by a contemporary man since Will's.
Can't wait to read the rest.
xx
I enjoyed the tease. A sensual story, tastefully put together. Absolutely delightful.
I loved the little surprise.
OMG I fell off the last page ... I did too ... LOL And mumbled .. " You fuck" LOL
I think besides the woman s easy going wildness, I really enjoyed the pace. I normally don't somber threw a story but this time I was relaxed and enjoyed the journey.This was a nice and suprising treat. Thanks so much for sharing it .. :-)
Very erotic story beautifully told without being pornographic.Builds up nicely against a background of sun, sea and happiness!
really loved the whole thing, sensual and teasing all the time
Thanks