Thank you for your comments. I'll implement those changes a.s.a.p. The concept of Angel Sword comes from what I have learned during the past 4 years as a born-again Christian. I believe that we can worship the Lord in such a way that demons will scramble to get out of our way...
Again, thank you for pointing out those errors,
God bless,
Tyrone
An interesting story. I liked the concepot of it. Only I noticed two spelling mistakes. "Shear" should be "Sheer" and "Lightening" should be "lightning".
enjoyed reading .
regards,
Koyel
Thank you for your comments bloop2009. This small "skirmish" pales in comparison to the true End of Days. Spiritual battles rage daily and I imagined what it would look like if one of those unseen battles could be witnessed on the Earth realm. Again, thank you for reading and commenting.
God Bless,
Tyrone
I look forward to reading it when you're done with it. It has an unusual approach.
As a Christian author, the plot/subject matter appealed to me.
I enjoy reading and writing nooks about the positive side of spirituality and the supernatural! Thank you for reading Angel Sword I, part 2 is still in production :-)
When reading it feels like in a comic. -And magicly the picture apear too.
"Clap! Clap! Clap!"
Part 2 is on the way! Thank you for reading part 1!
A very unusual and interesting story. ;-)
My thoughts exactly =;-) !
I have a larger story in mind and I'm trying to "feel my way" into telling it better.
Thank you for reading!
Thank you...part 2 is still in progress!