A dealing too many

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rabidlama
User: rabidlama
A dealing too many
  • Horror
  • 678 Words
  • Ages 18 and up
  • 40
  • 1
  • Publication Date: 01-18-2011
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Rgabel
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Rgabel

I liked the phrase 'ripped away from his paralysis'. Though not my genre this is a good start. Looking forward to reading more. Robynn

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High Overlord of Ramenkind
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High Overlord of Ramenkind

Tyty I like it, it's got a good story line, your sister missed a few spelling and grammar mistakes but that's not your fault. Keep Writing!
DF

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lazarus67
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lazarus67

Tyty, apart from some spelling errors, this is a cute fairy tale with a happy ending, about a big bad wolf...lol

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