Think Tank

The story of a girl who wished they were You. By:
theroost
User: theroost
Think Tank
Have you ever wished you were something out of the ordinary? That one day you found out you could breathe fire or turn invisible, or even read minds. For Evangeline, all she wants is normality.

  • Short Story
  • 3040 Words
  • Ages 0 and up
  • 420
  • 2
  • Publication Date: 05-08-2012
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theroost
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theroost

I am done, actually, and I didn't notice the switching tenses, I will fix that when I can. Thank you so much.

robbedbygreed
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robbedbygreed

Wow, interesting story! Are you done writing it? I'd like to read more if you're not.
Only confusing thing was the ending part of the book and that you sometimes went in-between past and present-tense.
Otherwise, it's a nice story :)

---RbG
By the way, if you'd like, would you read my book A World Invisible To The Wise and give me some feedback? I'd greatly appreciate it if you did :)

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