How our lives changed

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How our lives changed
Lyhla Mason's mother has recently died and she is suffering serious heartbreak. She now has to work harder to make life easier, finding love along the way.

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RebeckDawn

I started reading your book and I think it's really good. The heartache and sorrow the main character is going through, but also how she has to grow up and take on her mother's responsibilities - all really interesting for the reader! Great job!

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Deleted User

Hi purplebutterfly, just wanted to say that I love your book! It really conveys the feeling of grief well.

The only problem is the spelling and grammar. As a reader, it's a lot harder to read a book that is full of mistakes. To make the novel more accessible, I suggest that you either go back through and edit it yourself or get a friend to do it (sometimes having an objective opinion really helps).

Keep writing!

raindropsonarose

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