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and it's really good, i like the idea you have of this story^_^

Well written and inspiring. It brought tears to my eyes.

Thank you for writing it.

Cool, you entered the contest too! This was a great read. I think my favorite part was when Eli wanted to give up yet her sister didn't let her. The ending was just as great. I love the dynamic between the two sisters, the ending really showed that. I hope that you write another piece about how Eli has progressed. Great job. This gets my vote.
-Angely

this is actually really good, i think i have some competition.

Eli's List gave me goosebumps - not from fear of dying from the treacherous heigts, but the courage that emanates from her as she pushes herself to go onward, even with a limitation.

In this venture, she found strength of heart and a willingness to believe in herself; this is a tale which would definitely give a reader inspiration.

Good luck in the contest! 8)

I love it when a writer gets me to care about a character. Eli is an indomitable spirit!

Nicely paced story.

Cheers,

Mitch

Excellent writing! I am proud to have been your editor. You have written a heart-warming story of bravery against impossible odds in a heartfelt and realistic manner. Well done!