I love stories like this one, and in my mind the biggest issue facing any writer is to have a good tale to tell. You have this, so 3/4 of your work is done. Next comes editing. This is assuming you have this completely finished in rough draft form. I never worry about editing until after I get the rough draft finished. You don't want to interrupt the flow of the story. What I've done is taken your first paragraph, your... Show more
I love stories like this one, and in my mind the biggest issue facing any writer is to have a good tale to tell. You have this, so 3/4 of your work is done. Next comes editing. This is assuming you have this completely finished in rough draft form. I never worry about editing until after I get the rough draft finished. You don't want to interrupt the flow of the story. What I've done is taken your first paragraph, your... Show more
Thanks to all for the feedback and complements. Please stay tuned, I'm trying to put out a new part every week or so.
CREEEPY!!!! at first I was SO sure it was going to be the cat, with the messed up rooms and the smell in the bathroom(cat caught a mouse?) and everything, but I couldn't figure out the knives everywhere and the...stuff in the bathroom. WHO IS THAT GUY??? Guess it's on to the second one! :)
~lacy