Honolulu, HI
Never mind Sessions becoming an ersatz-sympathetic figure, which is disgusting
enough to contemplate. What about Trump himself? In one of the last things I
read before Trump's election shocked the world, a pundit described his
campaign as being on hospice care, merely focused on making the candidate as
comfortable as possible before the inevitable end. With Hope on her way out,
and Jarvanka soon (?) to follow, it feels... Show more
The end was quite irrevocable, I couldn't help feeling sorry for the poor family.
I am sure I wasn't that good at your age.
Good luck in the contest!
Yes, I enjoyed reading this short piece very much.
If I might suggest (humbly), do a quick spell check, which would benefit this promising piece. Consider capitalizing proper pronouns? Just a few minor things like that to improve your narrative flow:)
Good job:)