dude! hhury up! U need to get to the part where she meets daniel.
You have written with feeling. It looks like you have also done some fine research. It is an interesting subject you have chosen and you write well. You need to do what we all do, get a good friend to proof read for you. You have a talent for story telling. Keep writing! Robynn
Samantha, this story, inspite of all its grammatical and spelling errors, is truly great. I read every word.
You should really get someone to proofread it. I often do the same . No matter how careful I may be, someone will always find some mistakes.
Keep writing,
Laz
dude!!! you went crazy wrighting this!!!! haha you hade to look up evry little thing to make sure that the thing was used in world war 2!!!!!