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You're a really good writer for your age, and it's nicely written. I was immediately jealous of your book when I began reading because I was just thinking, "Oh my gosh! We're the same age and she writes so well!" Anyway, great book.
Review - This is a simplistic tale that reads along the lines of a fairy tale. Not sure of the Point of View in this story, but I think it was narrative. A lot happening in the many scene shifts.
Enjoyed the unusual names of Lilliana and Herome. The plot has a lot of twists and turns.
May I humbly suggest, just as an avid reader, nothing more, that you re-visit sentence structure. Another set of eyes always helps in editing.... Show more