The Life and Times of Bessie Coleman

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The Life and Times of Bessie Coleman
This is my report on Bessie Coleman that I used for school. It is pretty good, and I thought some history fans would like. Read this book to learn about a famous black person in History. Happy Black History Month!!!

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robbedbygreed

Very good. I didn't notice any mistakes. Bravo!

However, I do have several critiques:

I say this all the time about paragraphs. You need to define them! ;)
How you spaced them out isn't bad so you don't HAVE to change it, though it'd be nice.

Now, I know this is hard to do, but I was hoping for a little emotion in the story. But looked back and seeing that it was used for a school report, I understand why it isn't as in... Show more

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