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I think your grammer should imporve, but I understand what you are trying to write. I don't really care how u write it. I can read all kinds of things. i want to tell u that ur story is really nice, (besides the gramer, i dont care) :) I hope this positive info was friendly, i tried to do as best as i can to be friendly. Anyways i like it, u need to write more! I luv longer stories to, u know :D
Oh my goodness... the end... I did not expect that.
RN,
I really enjoyed your short story. I have suffered from the speed demon a time or too. Keep up the good work! Roz