BookRix

I don't really get it, but very entertaining. I loved all the oddly specific details.

I wanted more from this story. It's too late to do that for this contest, but it'll be a right fine apple to polish up a bit more. It's a good start, Rachel.
-Stormm

mirandabm,

I'm so glad you enjoyed it! No hints as to the ending though. Sorry. :)
(My friend even thinks it's the sister.)

Thank you for participating in our short
story writing contest "Family Stories".

The Librarian

I really enjoyed reading this - it's witty and fluent writing. I was a bit baffled by the ending though. Who was it, the thief? An imp? A ghost? Please enlighten me!