A Silent Love Story

True love is hard to find but it is not impossible. By:
A Silent Love Story
Please give your precious time to read this once. This is my first ever attempt to write it. So your suggestions are humble welcomed. I would be thankful to you if u help me write a better story. Lots n lots of love.

  • Short Story
  • 1594 Words
  • Ages 10 and up
  • 943
  • 3
  • Publication Date: 06-28-2014
Keywords: 
Love does exist
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SAYLI
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SAYLI

I really liked the story... It is good..

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Chris-Jean
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Chris-Jean

A sad tale of true love.

Pratik, with a fine edit this story will positively shine. I have already fallen in love with the characters.

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Khaled
Khaled

Love it wonderful

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Deleted User

Very impressive and nice attempt

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Pratik Mehta
Pratik Mehta

Thank you so much.. It means a lot to me..!!

Deleted User

can i give u a suggestion?

Pratik Mehta
Pratik Mehta

of course u can.. i wud love to hear suggestions from ur side..

Deleted User

If u could elaborate the story between rochelle and david it would be nice tht's it

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