read this story until you won the contest but it has spurred me on to read your other books.
This is an outstanding writing.
You have a nice style about you.
Well done for this
Wendyxx
An amazing story! The character’s emotion wasn’t only narrated, but it was beautifully shown. You have the talent to write a good novel. Keep it up!
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