So far your book is great! I am glad to find an author that doesn't have alot of errors in their book. I mean there is a few, but everyone makes them. Can't wait to read the updates.
Whit
I'll try my best to update it whenever I can, and to keep you updated too. It might be tough, because sometimes I might simply rewrite a part, or add a sentence. I am please that you like it so far, as this is my first time writing something as dark as this.