wow that was great cant wait to read more of your art
That was a cool book a little scary at first and really sad. all i want to know is why did william do all that to her? did he like her or some thing? please tell me. your friend thiliathewolfgirl
Okay, very creepy indeed. But I felt bad for the girl and I hated William, so I guess serves him right? (lol)
You had some few typos, but that's not a big deal. Overall, another great story from you. You know you should compile your stuffs and try entering the FFC. :)
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