Herzschmerz

Liebeskummer eines Mädchen By:
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Herzschmerz
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  • Publication Date: 03-24-2010
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Du hast eine zauberhafte Geschichte geschrieben, zum Mitfühlen schön, allerdings geraten Dir die Dialoge und die Erzählperspektiven gelegentlich durcheinander.
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