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Bullies are such a headache. How to fight back?

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J.C. Laird

You're getting pretty good at this writing thing.

Good story(s). Keep it up!

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robbedbygreed

First off, I love how you did the cover, even if I've seen it before ;) Well done!

And the drabbles are cool. Very interesting.

The first is intriguing. It's like reading someones journal! Loved it :) I just hope all the others connect to it.

The second seems to connect but is a bit strange. I can, however, feel the irritated drowsiness of the man and his exhausting work.

The third drabble makes little sense to me. I understand... Show more

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RevkenR

You work for Lockjaw now. He was the bully when you were young, and now you are getting even by letting the arson investigators know what he is up to.

It is an interesting story, but I think it is not a good life lesson, as with all bullies, he will probably let you take the fall.

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Deleted User

Nice life that guy leads. You used your 100 words to make 3 very interesting stories.

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gooduklady

I am sure it is "me" and not "you" -- I really liked these three interconnected drabbles. I liked them a lot. However, I was not really certain I totally understood the final one. You left an "s" off the word "house" -- and I don't know what "accelerants" are or what you intended to do in the houses (rob them?) - and what this had to do with bullies.

Again - I am sure a minor explanation will clear it all up for me (please... Show more

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