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i really fell for those lines u wrote,lol

Really enjoyed how you made the poems so intimate.

I love it, absolutely! There's so much emotion and Depth to the poem. Keep up your amazing talent!

I would vote twice and three score more. I totally loved the emotion.

I loved both poems. Loads of feeling. Bravo

Oh wow that was just awesome! Lovely, beautiful heartfelt expression of love and romance! Enjoyed the anti as well! Thanks Melissa for sharing your work and also thanks to Lazarus for suggesting the read. I so voted for you! (:

As always from the heart, genuine and true. Loved the anti-love poem and the alibis stanza. Wasn't it you who thought love would never find you? Love has given wings to your heart and words so clear. Beautiful in its simplicity. Voted! Robynn

Thank you so much for your votes, stars and comments. I appreciate your thoughts very much. God bless you, guys and gals!

Was very well written and warm and sincere and flowed beautifully and tender. If there were more ands I would tell you about them./great writing/joeparente

Melissa,

You've put me in a bind.
You and Laz
Have expressed
your feeling
as clear as a window
Made of glass.

You let us look inside,
You show us your love
So clearly.

I love your poems
So dearly.

Jack