BookRix

Melissa: You are totally awesome. Loved it. Like the teasing between husband and wife, especially at the end.

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Interesting.
Very interesting...
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-C.O.P.

Your victory was long overdue, as your writing is exemplary. I truly believe, you have a bright future in the world of writing.
Chris

i like the twists and turns in this story already. So far so good!

Your imagination is very good & it has been slated very well.

Heartiest congratulations.i will be reading your book very soon.

Melissa,

As always you have written a very interesting and captivating story. Congratulations on your contest win. :)

Exceptional writing!

Tonya
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Congratulations on your win. I hope you continue to write winners. God bless.

What I liked most about this story, aside from the excellent writing, was how you were able to convey quite a complex situation in such a short number of words. Very nice indeed!

I changed the paper so it would be easier to read. :O)