A Lesson In Fear

A Frightful Night Brings No Delight By:
A Lesson In Fear

Bruno has a habit of scaring his friends for fun. One night, they dare him to enter a haunted house. Will he make it out of the scary experience alive?


  • Short Story
  • 807 Words
  • Ages 0 and up
  • 646
  • 5
  • Publication Date: 01-17-2013
  • ISBN: 978-3-7309-3011-3
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tj.gonzales
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tj.gonzales

Okay Melissa, you little tease. Not much to read in your reading samples, so i guess I will have to break down and buy some of your books. You are a bad, bad girl.

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mysterywriter723
mysterywriter723

Oh, goodie! I hope you will consider checking them out. Thanks.

tj.gonzales
tj.gonzales

Your goodies are worth checking, my dear. Ooops sounds like I'm the wolf.

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Deleted User

Okay, you got me! hahaha, I loved that ending. Nicely done, Melissa

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J.C. Laird
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J.C. Laird

Nicely written and edited. You managed a complete story in an 800-word flash fiction piece, no easy feat. Good work.

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jetski
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jetski

Yeah,

The ghosts had the last laugh.

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UniquePoet60
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UniquePoet60

Melissa,

I enjoyed this scary story that you have written. What an awesome unexpected ending.

Great writing!

judycolella
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judycolella

Cute, concise, and very well-written. And the ending - perfect!

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skater7786
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skater7786

Impressive twist. HA that was great.

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and the ending was a great surprise.

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