BookRix

What an ending. Really scary story and commendable writing :)

Enjoyed the read. Thanks :)

thank you

have you read 'Unwind' by Neal Shusterman? Your story has that feel to it....Paula

I know..the wife created the ending. what she failed to understand is that i had the ending first and was building up to it. lol

I have to admit (sheepishly) I read this a couple days ago and was confused by it. Today I really liked it!!! Liked the flow, liked the ending! Good job!!

into a couple working together.

I wrote the story, she edited it, she didn't like the ending and changed it. I didn't like her ending, but we posted it because I didn't want to work on it again. Then a friend read it and when we pitched the different endings, she liked mine so we edited again, together this time, and we re-posted it.

Just goes to show that when you think you're thinking the same thing, it takes some more discussion to get it right.

and we forgot to mention that the dedication is to Bocaj (a real hero).