I'm so glad you asked me to be your friend; I wouldn't have had the pleasure of enjoying your story! I love finding writers who are new to me here, especially ones with genuine skill like yours.
The story gave an unusual perspective for this genre, and unlike so many of the others, is a perfect balance between action and psychology. Awesome!
I enjoy this, although I guess what she might be, the way you brought the story along kept me reading with anticipation. I would love to read more about Tina, her past and future relationships. Nicely done.
Great job of disguising what she really was and what she was really seeking.
But in a way, especially in today's world, are not both men and women seeking prey rather than a mind-bending love.
Very good job of setting the mood and describing the character's thoughts on love.
James
Thank you, James. I wrote this story in just a few minutes, it dropped into my head and had to come out! Glad you enjoyed it.
Loved the twist at the end! But then I'm a sucker for Vampire stories! (pun intended). I look forward to reading your other books!
Thanks Lenora. I'm working on one now.....
Thank you so much. I enjoyed writing it!
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