Crimson Moon

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Crimson Moon
Beth has lost it all, when she suddenly meets the mysterious Phillip. He's dark, and fascinating and seems to know some things about her mom and how to cope with her death. As she starts to fall in love with him, his identity is reveiled, sending her on the journey of a lifetime! If you liked Twilight and Percy Jackson, then you'll LOVE this! (Not entirely finished yet. Enjoy)

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mordred Edited about 13 years ago

I like your theme. Gto a good story going. You need to proof read it and redo some of the punctuation. also, got a funy spot, wh4ere Philip takes her home on his bike and her car is at school - next morning it's at home, but wont start.
As you said, it's in progress so when you reread it, you'll pick up on that stuff and can clean it up.
I hope you finish it - I want to see where you go with it.

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mangapanda Edited about 14 years ago

Sorry guys I haven't written any in a long time, I know. Wow, that is is cool that you're trying to read my book even though you're German! I've been insanely busy doing summer classes and all. Just so you know why I'm busy I'll say that I'm skipping a grade! That's no realexcuse though and I promise to get to it ASAP!!

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feuerfunken Edited about 14 years ago

Heyy!

Okay, first I say, I'm german, so it wasn't as easy to understand all. But I have understood it, and I like you book!
I can't give you a good comment where I say what you could do better, because, you know, I'm german and I don't know all the words and... okay, stop. Would you tell me when you write any more?

feuerfunken

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mangapanda Edited about 14 years ago

YAY! I'm glad everyone's faving my book! I will try to work on it soon but I've been busy and, sadly, forgot about it....

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mangapanda Edited about 14 years ago

uh bluemonkey....that doesnt relaly make any sense...lil bit random eh?

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Deleted User Edited about 14 years ago

make her see a dude named daniel with a pet monkey it will surprise people

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Deleted User Edited about 14 years ago

I love this book!!! your an amazing writer cant wait for more!!!;)

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