Laz,
Wow. What a beautiful book cover.
You possess the talent of writing a captivating story within a story. What a unique twist. The death of a ship and its passengers sailing the ocean. So sad.
Exceptional writing as usual. A masterpiece!
Very fanciful, decorative writing, but not so gaudy that it was lost. Every analogy was spot on and easy to understand. A real study in the craft.
Dear Laz,
You have retold the story of the Titanic in an extraordinarily beautiful manner. Exquisite and poignant imagery.
Keep up the great work!
regards,
Koyel
Well written! One never knows what will happen in life's next turn./joe
Thanks for the eloquent read - so many lines to quote, so many songs to sing. I would think this rendition, unique in its melodic strains that brought the great ship to its knees.
It was a new way to reveal what Titanic was about, what she coukld have been. Fate was against her (or was it doomed from the start?). You have told this story in such an imaginative way that none can doubt your feelings for such a distatrous enterprise. Treating her as a bride was an unusual take on the subject and yu carried the theme through very well, right to the end. I liked the repeated pattern of the orchestra... Show more