Angella Smith

By:
Angella Smith
Angella Smith was nothing special, she was seen as dirt, not even worthy to be looked at or called by a name. She never had a happy life,things got worse as time passed.


This Book is Part of a Series "The only life"
  • Short Story
  • 177 Words
  • Ages 14 and up
  • 692
  • 5
  • Publication Date: 08-18-2012
Keywords: 
Arranged, abuse, tears
Posts and Comments
Adam Lewis LaValley
Important Post
Adam Lewis LaValley Edited about 13 years ago

Pretty good start. I can imagine the scene very well, and think this will make a fantastic story.

To help the flow in that quick change in perspective, try changing "The girl's name was Angela Smith" to "That was me. My name is Angela Smith". I think that will help make it go smoothly. 8)

Good luck!

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