Thank you very much for your comment and fav. It really means a lot :)
Thank you jendaz0, I really appreciate it. I do want to continue. I wrote it a few years ago, after a dream, and set it aside. I guess life got in the way. I would like to make this into a graphic novel, maybe. I appreciate the feedback, and I will look at your work, and try to do the same. Take care, Larkin.