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Roschester, NY
Today I drooped by my daughters high school, she graduated in 2007, in support
of the student walkout. I now have hope for the future. Generation Z and the
Millennials, will change the world. This Boomer is happy and very proud of
them. Watch out America.. They are not giving up!
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I remember voting for this incredibly good little piece in the contest a month or two ago!
Still love it!
An intriguing well-written story. Loved the eerie feel that your words placed all throughout.
Thanks for the read :)
Hi Laura,
To start with, I loved the cover pic. Definite creepiness!
A little snippet of a piece, full of intrigue. Your last line says it all though.
Some tense issues, 'are' instead of 'were' that sort of thing.
Well done.
Bek :)
writing - look forward to more of your stories...Paula
This is very good, leaves you wondering at the end..very good indeed.
your friend,
zunaloy
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