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hmmmmm nice one

Sometimes parents think they know what is good for their children and make decisions based on this achaic convictions. By doing this, they take away the God given right of children to choose. These authocratic parents forget that if God were to treat them the same way, they would not stand a chance. The job of every parent is to instruct their children on how to make the right choices and ensure that whatever chioce they end of making was well informed.

Powerful imagery!

Thank you Wendy and Paulashene it really means a lot, it was actually my first attempt to write a story and i will surely listen to patrick's advice :)

please listen to Patrick's advice - this story could go from good to great...voted and kept...p

Good luck
Wendyxx

Nice story hun, I like that it has a happier ending than the original, and you have great use of wording although some smaller grammar errors. Over all a well told story, let me know when voting begins :)

Thanks Ryan' it motivates me to write more :)

A Star in Heaven has some classic quality of a love tale that embodies the spectrum all the way from the romantic to the tragic. Full of emotion it conveys a sense of peace and acceptance with the world while also admitting a lack of understanding. This is an exceptional story and I sincerely hope you continue to express your talent through writing!