BookRix

gurl i luv this i am totally hooked

Read it again, just 'cause it was so awesome!

Adding to my earlier comment, I found this breathtaking. You have an amazing eye for detail in your descriptions! The scenario painted is vivid, rich, and magical. Certain elements are sad; causing feelings of empathy for the two girls. You definitely have what it takes to be a successful writer, Kristiana. Very excellent work here!

I commented earlier and gave you my vote.

Very touching, with an otherwordly feel. I voted.

A lovely piece of prose that touches the reader's heart. You got my vote. Good luck!

vote....p

Good luck in the competition. I have voted for your story.
Chris

great book

Thanks Patrick for the vote and the confidence boost. =]

Writingmum, I look forward to the feedback, thank you for your vote.