a picnic's murder

what a perfect day... for murder By:
a picnic's murder
-for those who don't mind crime please tell me if you want the age changed (on my board not mail) thanks-so in my csi class we had to solve a crime and then we had to write a story telling what happened so i am thinking y not use this to my advantage tell me what u think and thanks for reading (complete)

  • Mystery & Crime
  • 854 Words
  • Ages 10 and up
  • 1229
  • 14
  • Publication Date: 07-13-2012
Keywords: 
murder, picnic, baby
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It's a comical crime, in a way, perhaps because you jump around and change subjects so often. You write with simplistic ease and I rather liked it. There are a few technical errors but I am sure you can spot them. It's not a classic but it was a fun read.

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