South Haven, MI
You give the man too much credit for thinking, it's pathetic. He's nothing
more than reactionary, gloating on pleasure from attention no matter from
where it comes and hating all else. Evident in his offish televised wish --
however fleeting until someone else fauns all over him -- to remove peoples'
guns without Due Process. (No personal hypocrisy there!) He's a man who cannot
fathom anything past his own ego. That... Show more
kicks A$$! For the love of Pete add two more pages and enter it in the Frightening Fiction contest. Just put up an afterward about how you got your ideas or something.
chryse I have to agree, this is the first time I've heard a voice. :)
My Goodness, Joshua...this is great...I mean it. People tell me that I write well....but I pale next to you. Your description, use of words to make the story flow, the story itself, I could 'see' the whole thing in technicolor. The diction, spelling ...flawless.
I'm not a fan of horror, yet your tale held my attention from the 'get-go'.
Why didn't you submit this into the contest?
One small question...does Manda get to have that... Show more
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