An electic collection of laughter blended with nature images and everyday life. Twisters and such. The time you got into a fight with a kite! I will continue to read some more.
Ilike the first page short ryhme, then
line by line humorious at times about fishing, storms well done and graphic, about everyday life in different circumstances. Characters are well done as are scenes. I liked this rhymed book
and feel the wilderness and nature around us. My early years were spent on a dairy farm with lots of wooded areas
brooks streams amd an apple Orchard.
Thank you for a very rewarding read and good luck with this book.
Awesome writing :)
Your poems were really fun to read, made me smile all through out. Your style of writing short poems and some in sort of story-telling was really cool:)
Thanks for the read :)
thank you for your kind comments./joeparente
Dear Joe,
I like the straightforward demotic tone of your poems. I think you tend to rhyme a little too stringently and this restricts your diction.My favourite poem is the title poem. Keep writing.
Thank you Blondel./I appreciate your comments./joeparente
Im young and noble but I say that this is pure poetry
