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great plot but it needs alot of correction... you forget to use 's like for instance Mother's not Mother or comes instead of come... it's minor errors but still........iloveit!
this story is about a 17 year old girl name Rose and she got to see something, that no one seen before, but their is other girl name Jess that also seen "The Thing" Too, They can't really describe it, Rose and Jess want to fine out what it is, do they catch it, or will they die or even maybe lucky to be alive...
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