This was a very moving and beautiful eulogy to a mother passing.
If it is fiction it is well done enough to read as real - and if it is real - how extraodinarily blessed you were to know such a woman!
Only one small criticism - while italic font looks nice on the page - it is not easy to read for many - you would be better using a simpler font with good spaces between paragraphs to enable the reader to digest the work better -... Show more
This was a very moving and beautiful eulogy to a mother passing.
If it is fiction it is well done enough to read as real - and if it is real - how extraodinarily blessed you were to know such a woman!
Only one small criticism - while italic font looks nice on the page - it is not easy to read for many - you would be better using a simpler font with good spaces between paragraphs to enable the reader to digest the work better - remembering we are reading you on the screen and not on paper!
Keep going - you're doing great!