What a sweet, sweet story to get across to children the message about bullying and teasing! I love the happy ending. I hope you join the Children's Authors group and submit this for reading. Great job!
one that any kid would surely enjoy, the story is well written,
there needs to be more books written for kids to enjoy reading, good Job my friend jack, I guess I am still a kid i like the story and I am sixty two years, old guess we all have a little child inside of each of us,
This was adorable :D
You should really expand this. Just as everyone else has already commented, it would be nice to learn more about Freddie.
I think we have a series of children's stories budding here, Jack.
This is a little gem! Personally, I'd love to see little Gorf and his world extended :)
You send a P.M. entitled "What is a Gorf?" and you just gotta hit the link and see what it is.
It turned out to be a rewarding little children's vignette--entertaining and captivating--something its target audience will certainly enjoy.
Definitely set it aside to include in your children's book of stories.
A good one!