BookRix

This little gem is one of my favorites. A must read for flash fiction lovers.

Another nice tale by my one of my favorite authors. I did see this one coming, however, but it didn't take away any of my reading enjoyment. Thank you Jack!

Your story was awesome, but one thing that didn't seem natural to me was Daisy shouting, "He did it. He killed my husband." It sounds too much like she'd thrilled. I'd suggest removing the "he did it" part to make that sound more believable.

Did he really murder a man, or not? You always have an awesome twist coming to the end of your stories that really make people guessing. It would be interesting on how much further you can go with this story.

Great job, as always. :):)