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This story could be so harrowingly true.-I hope I am wrong!

I have voted.

Chris

good work

Short, sad and so final...no punches pulled.
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Ps...I guess my friend Val never tied a hangman's noose.

You show great promise and potential. Please, keep writing. I voted for you, sweetie.

I tried, I really did. However, I could not understand the first paragraph...and the rest of it was really confusing. One tip....do not use "it's" unless you mean "it is". Otherwise, you should write "its" for the possessive.

I cannot give you my vote, just my suggestion that you read what you have written out loud and then try re-writing so that it is understandable. Good luck and keep writing.