you should add more... like she should wake up in the hospital or something and she should go into a coma and she should find her friend and try to bring her back.
I loved it though it is short it was really sad...
Will there be more to it??.(:
I almost cried at how beautiful this was. But I was expecting a happy ending, but at least now they can be together?
omg!! u put this up in my birthday!!! nov.15th!!! i am definitely reading it!! it looks really interesting!!
This squeezed my heart and I believe we all have a lost loved one in mind when we read something this emotional. Good luck and God Bless.