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I like the story-line and think you could defiantly make it longer and add more detail , I would also recommend using spell-check this coming from someone who also makes a lot of spelling mistakes, however spellings aside I do love the story and with a little improvement this would most definitely be something I would read :I
This book is OKay....,
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dino girl rocks
oh shut up amy hesh
A.Harlow
God keep your nickers on lady :}
dino girl rocks
I will