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I'm sold and need to know more of the story. You are a pro. You teased me to the point that I need to know what happens. Your writing is Mickey S. and more, descriptions opened the door and I need to shut it by reading the rest.
The best1./joeparente
Your use of descriptive phrases is wonderful. You have talent.
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djreid
Thanks! I appreciate the feedback.
Very well written. Great story. Gread Read. You got my vote.
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I enjoyed the artistic style of this story....colorful,vibrant and realistic. I also enjoyed the ending and the feeling of uncertainty...excellent read!
Thank you for participating in our short story writing contest "Rain Stories".
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