Im lovin´it.
You made it good :)
My favorite part is the beginning.
The special evthng.
I´d like to read more short stories, if you need a reader tell me :)
damn youre good!!
I really liked this one. Not only is it written in english but also you write about something you can really think about. I really enjoyed reading this story and- for that matter- the other ones you have already written. you have a gift and a talent and I would love to read more from you soon.
xx
all the best,
Avila