Hey I sorry I didn't get to read your story until now, I've been a bit out of commission. I greatly enjoyed your story, thank you for recommending it. I must say the cover is an eye catcher, and I know it had to be short for the contest but I hope you lengthen and detail it some more. Again good job :)
This is a brave snapshot, if you will. I gather it met the requirements for a competition but, to my mind, it appears a window into a much greater story. I hope you save it and plan to develop it one day. Nicely done, Chloe.
By the way, it was the cover that caught my eye.
the girl who is in the cover is ment to be the main charcter- I was ment to edit it but I didnt have time
I came to vote, although there were errors in your writing, I still think it was good enough for my vote. Good luck!