You have a great style of writing. I like how it is simple, but really paints a picture for me. I did get kind of lost between the boy going for the pony, and the hired guns coming to town. Other than that it is a great book.
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cb.cooper
Your right about that middle part, I've been meaning to work on that. I actually wrote it for a 'cowboy up' contest- it had to be 3000 words or less- it's hard to come up with a story and then keep it in a specific word count.
That's part of the reason I never submitted it :-/
Hi Dave, Thanks for reading my "books" I'm glad you like them!
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