Retribution

The Reckoning By:
User: cb.cooper
Retribution
...Because some people just refuse to lie down and die....................................................................................................

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western short
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Cold, man, so cold! It fits though. When the west was young and hard bitten this is how we picture it. Well written, CB.

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cb.cooper

Hi Dave, Thanks for reading my "books" I'm glad you like them!

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sodelight

I didn't have time to read all the way to the end, but your use of words in the story gave it a very professional sense. Good job!

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crspy999999

You have a great style of writing. I like how it is simple, but really paints a picture for me. I did get kind of lost between the boy going for the pony, and the hired guns coming to town. Other than that it is a great book.

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cb.cooper

Your right about that middle part, I've been meaning to work on that. I actually wrote it for a 'cowboy up' contest- it had to be 3000 words or less- it's hard to come up with a story and then keep it in a specific word count.
That's part of the reason I never submitted it :-/

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Deleted User

Wow I love it its very remoniscent of the old westerns, i especially love your ending line a very memorable one

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