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very good

I liked the story, from dark beginings outside of your control to a happy life that is deserved. I think the telling of the tale could be expanded, clearer to follow though, and I saw a few spelling and grammer mistakes, nothing a little editing won't fix :)

I would just like to thank you for the nice words!

I didn't know what to expect here, but I must say, i found this story a very powerful and poignant read.

The way you've relayed the story makes it completely believable. I hope to God it's not, but if it isn't a story based on your own experience, you are going to be one great writer.

I was very impressed with your grammar and spelling and apart form typos, the only fault i could find was in your other book where the print was centered and it bugged me a bit. That one was also impressively written.

You know, even if these are memoirs, you still have a very powerful voice. If by writing you are trying to face and destroy your demons, the way you write, I can easily see you branching out into general fiction.

I hope you do and if you give it a go, please give me a nudge and I'll come and review it for you.

Good job, sweetie. Keep it up.
Wendyxx