I liked the idea of a person being a door that you pass through. And that this door leads to the serpent through Eve I found especially intriguing. Thanks for this
So far, the story is interesting. I think you have used the word, "than" instead of the word, "then" throughout the story. The word, “principal” is also been misspelled in many places. I think you'll have to proof read this book again. Best regards, Suresh.
I'm impressed by the amount of positive feedback especially because it's really just a draftish thing. I just wanted to challenge myself and see what I could write in one night
stephen king thats quite a compliment junie heck I blushed when I read it.
You're far too kind
I'm glad you all like the charecters thats usually where I like to put the emphasis. Although this is the first time I've used an adult or man as my main narrative so I was a bit concerned. I plan on leaving this for awhile, perhaps I'll get back to it but for now it's just an idea i was playing with