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This is a cute short story. We really can’t tell why, but some animals create a real connection with men. Puppies and dogs are one of them. It may be because they are special. Have a great week!

a cute story!

I can see that ''she'' is very loved ...nice flow ...your character is very well
revealed here...lovely to read...Mari

short story but it was long enough to invoke the love one has for the rescued and the love given abundantly in return..thanks for the read...Paula

Hi Ankita,
This is really a cute story and I enjoyed reading it. Only I would like to suggest that it moved too fast. Perhaps a little more details would have been better. Just a few thoughts. Good work.Write on !

True it is a short story but an enjoyable read. Might suggest adding more depth to what you wrote. Name the town, the person and what other animals were for sale i the shop. Add a little tension with all the puppies sold, but then this one was found... that sort of thing.And plans for the future might be interesting to include.First collar, first basket, choice of food and the dog flap, not forgetting the walks that will happen in the future. And what about the family at Christmas time?
Best wishes
Cleveland

I remember once rescuing a puppy and taking care of it for few days. One day suddenly I found it missing. wish I knew where it is.
nice story.Thanks for sharing.

My daughter rescued a Jack Russell/Chihuahua mix last April, called "Dolly." This dog was so grateful to be brought home that she just sits and stares in adoration at Vanessa. It is wonderful to rescue dogs...lovely story.

"and knowing she might never do so." would be a change I would suggest.

Otherwise, adorable, heart wrenching, and cute. Makes me miss my beloved Ginger who passed away two years ago. I haven't had a desire to replace her until now! Thank you for sharing. Robynn

A warm read. I'd suggests dropping the last paragraph. You don't need it and it saps the power of the piece.

--cupideros